Road to Hope

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Ryen Kya

Ryen Kya, aka Image(named, like quite a lot of girls from that time period, after a certain water goddess who was the subject of a very popular TV show at the time), was hatched in Y943, she and her other half Ayen are the older pair of Ryen-pack's children. Ryen-pack lives in a fancy apartment on the shores of the oasis in the predominantly upper middle class District 2, not far from the huge skyscrapers of Ikun's Financial District, District 1, where they work for an influencing firm; basically they get hired by wealthy clients to get the Lawspeakers to change laws for them. In Y952, Ryen-pack gets a new assignment to help a foreign billionaire pack from the Meatbucket region (Andin city-state in specific), Dagwar-pack, to get Ikun to remove their regulations around geoengineering and other green tech like ecological nanobots. Dagwar-pack seem to be very eccentric to say the least, but have built up an eco-tech empire in the Meatbucket and are looking to expand to the Ikun market. However, since Ikun has banned this and heavily pressures city-states around the world to do the same using its considerable soft power, this is because any global Climate Control System that arises from widespread geoengineering would likely be heavily controlled by their geopolitical enemy Koranah, who is ahead of Ikun in this industry. This is of course not told to the public; the official narrative is that geoengineering is dangerous and unreliable, and the environment is collapsing so fast that only extreme measures like leaving the planet via Project Hope are viable.

This quickly becomes a passion project for Ryen-pack, their alpha Kerok in particular, whose birth-pack were climate scientists. Ryen-pack sees this as an opportunity to do a lot of good, as they believe that with Project Hope, society is hurtling towards collapse and Project Hope is accelerating their demise. They spend long hours working on the project, staying at the office far into the night and coming in on weekends. The young Kya and Ayen aren't neglegted, the adults still spend time with them and teach them a lot about their fields of expertise (as they all are highly educated, having gone to the world-famous Nktan University). However, they still spend a lot of time in the office while their birth-pack makes calls and writes reports, instead of being out playing or exploring or doing whatever young Kyanah normally do...well young Kyanah from middle class packs anyway. Even the pack's vacations are heavily geared towards work, they often travel to far flung city-states to gather environmental data or speak with local politicians, scientists, and business owners.

As the years go by, Ryen-pack starts to put together a picture of what's going on, and how geoengineering and related technologies are not as dangerous as Ikun's politicians claim, and that the environment, while bad, is not collapsing fast enough to justify the stated motives for Project Hope. However, this isn't enough for Ikun's Lawspeakers to put a stop to Hope, or really do much of anything, and the project keeps rolling onward. Kya and Ayen remain very close to each other, at one point making each other these bracelet thingies and promising to wear them even when they had their own packs. However, Ayen is clearly much more academically inclined and more interested in activism for Ryen-pack's mission, whereas Kya of a normal kid (as far as Kyanah go...) who is growing up to be more outdoorsy and also a bit of a geek--she kind of admires Project Hope on the down low. Their second pair of young, Nyak and Korek, hatch in Y954, with considerable complications for Teren, who laid their eggs; this is about the only thing that temporarily distracts the pack from their work.

By Y960, Ryen-pack's boss decides to drop Dagwar-pack as a client and move on to less controversial clients with a better chance of winning. However, Ryen-pack, at Kerok's behest calls in a lot of favors and takes on a lot of extra work from their boss in exchange for being able to keep Dagwar-pack as a client. This means that the pack is even more consumed with work. However, it is all for naught, and by Y962, their boss announces that the company is officially dropping the Dagwar-pack work and they can no longer cover for Ryen-pack. Nua, who is a late import to Ryen-pack and one of the more impulsive members, blurts out that they are going to get into politics to do it themselves. Kerok actually thinks this is a good idea, and Ryen-pack quits to pursue a challenge for Lawspeaker. Though naturally, leaving their job doesn't mean less work for them. They hire a pack of analysts and staffers to work out an optimal strategy--which isn't cheap even for Ryen-pack--and begin promoting themselves in Ikun and beyond. Their campaign strategy is highly optimized and data driven, with very specific words and actions called for from all of the pack. This includes their young--while Nyak and Korek are young enough that they can be sedated for high profile events without drawing too much negative attention, Kya and Ayen are expected to actively participate and play their complex roles in showcasing Ryen-pack as a viable Lawspeaker. Ayen takes much better to this than Kya, she studies their pack's strategy more and deeper and plays the role of a firey young activist whose greatest fear is growing up in a dying world. Whereas Kya is clearly less comfortable in dealing with crowds, conforming to AI optimized scripts, and putting more energy and time into politics than she has to.

Slowly but surely, Ryen-pack begins to spend more time with Ayen than Kya, as Ayen is subconsciously seen as a more valuable resource for their political aims. Though everyone is on the surface still kind and loving, it's difficult to actual spend time with or get significant emotional energy from the adults, even Nua, whom Kya was very close to before Ryen-pack went into politics. Teren has probably changed the least, but has always been kind of reserved. In Y963, Ryen-pack files their first challenge for Lawspeaker against District 2's incumbent pack, but the challenge fails. Ryen-pack decides to regroup and focus less on obscure geoengineering policies and go straight for an attack on Project Hope. They realize it doesn't matter if geoengineering is a more sustainable solution than Project Hope--the elites know this already and have other considerations, and the regular citizens will never believe it due to years of propaganda. Kerok in particular is highly disappointed in their failure and insists that everyone needs to work harder and even more aggressively optimize their public behavior.

Y963 becomes Y964 and Ryen-pack goes for a Lawspeaker position again. This time they challenge the Lawspeakers Association itself with the goal of creating a new seat for themselves, and they focus on the economic and environmental effects of Project Hope itself, rather than going for a geoengineering platform directly. They actually win their challenge this time and become Lawspeakers for Ikun. Now they're in a position to kill Project Hope by removing it from the city's annual agenda, but getting there will be a difficult process. They first have to identify potential allies, built up their reputation, and identify possible threats to their soft power through extensive research on the other Lawspeakers. And of course the other Lawspeakers and their staffers are busy sizing them up as well. Ayen adapts well to this, though her zealousness and youthful lack of nuance sometimes come back to bite Ryen-pack and drive away possible allies. But Kya remains a fish out of water in the Hall of Power, especially with all the adults being pre-occupied and less supportive. Kerok often expresses disappointment when she fails to adhere to their carefully crafted strategies. Kaun does try to tell Kerok to go easier on Kya, but Kerok often doesn't listen to her and insists that the work they're doing is too important for any mistakes. Kaun still goes out of her way to try and mold her into a skilled political activist like Ayen, or at least an academic, much to Kya's dismay, and Teren, who is easily the least political of the adults, provides occasional respite for Kya, as does spending time with the boys, which she tries to do a lot while the rest of the pack is caught up in their political scheming and strategizing.

As Kya and Ayen reach their teenage years and the associated dominance struggles, they naturally drift apart, becoming more distant. This is exacerbated by the way in which the adults have played favorites and pitted them against each other to encourage the best possible "results" out of both of them. Ayen has developed a bit of an arrogant streak from years of being the golden child, and Kya has become somewhat agressive and resentful towards her as well, though they have their moments when they get along. Through Y965 and Y966, the pack begins to find their footing in the Lawspeakers Association and begins slowly but surely gathering together a bloc of politicians willing to work to stop Project Hope, for various reasons of their own, from seeing it as a waste of money to genuine concern about the environment to having money in the geoengineering sector to being neutral but willing to work on anti-Hope initiatives in exchange for other concessions. This also makes them enemies though, as there are many packs with deep pockets and a vested interest in continuing Project Hope, including Nyektak-pack themselves. A common strategy in Ikun's political culture (and really the planet's political culture as a whole) is to aggressively target the children of one's political enemies with constant harassment and slander to provoke their packs into withdrawing from politics to protect them. As their enemeies' analysts have deduced that Kya is the weak link, she bears the brunt of this. However, Ryen-pack refuses to fall for such tricks even though it's clearly hurting their children.

Meanwhile, Ryen-pack have to make many difficult decisions as a Lawspeaker, often about things that have no direct relation to Project Hope. In order to make allies and raise funding, they find themselves having to increasingly do shady back-room deals with huge corporations and foreign governments, and find themselves sacrificing many key positions and values to keep their position and influence among the Lawspeakers, which often causes disagreements among the adults. They end up lying, cheating, suppressing the economy, and more, but justify this under the assumption that they need to keep their power and influence to have a chance of stopping Project Hope. In the midst of navigating the shady world of Ikun politics, Ryen-pack is also often flying around the world to fancy climate conferences and leveraging their professional contacts and AI matching to arrange future packs for Kya and Ayen. For Ayen, they gradually find the perfect blend of scientific and activist minds from influential packs to place her with, which she seems very happy and excited about. However, Kya definitely does not want their help or involvement in selecting a pack for her, which complicates things further and puts her under even more pressure, and she spirals down a destructive path of self harming culminating in early Y967 with consuming a bottle of Teren's sleeping pills to try and end things after a huge fight with Ayen in which Kerok predictably took Ayen's side. However, she's discovered by Ayen and hospitalized before they can take full effect. However, Ryen-pack, and especially Kerok, have by this point become so consumed by their political ambitions that they rapidly carry on with what they were doing, even having an important meeting as soon Kya physically recovers enough for the pack to leave the hospital. However, Ayen gives Kya a heartfealt apology and they make up somewhat.

The next couple of years go by quickly, as Ryen-pack begins to consider the possibility of challenging Nyektak-pack for City Alpha eventually. The economy continues to freefall but Ryen-pack is well-to-do enough to avoid the worst of it. Efforts to get Kya a pack resume to some extent, but don't really get anywhere. And Kya continues to deal with lingering depression due to both the stresses of political life and her belief that the planet is quickly dying and her pack is working to dismantle what she thinks is the best chance of saving their species. She becomes outright supportive of Project Hope, even to the point of having some pro-Hope merch, but for obvious reasons has to keep this secret from the rest of her pack. In Y969, she and Ayen both sit the entrance exams for Nktan University, as this is seen as a critical next step in the initiative to stop Project Hope and save the planet (though Kya, for her part, actually wants to be a scientist or engineer on Project Hope so she can get herself and her future pack off the planet). Located in the neighboring city-state of Nktan, Nktan University, the most prestigious university in the world and Ryen-pack's alma mater. Ayen receives an invitation (Nktan University is so prestigious that you don't apply, you have to get invited to attend) as do all the prospective packmates picked out for her, but as it turns out, Kya is not invited and is inconsolable, as without this, getting onto Project Hope is much more difficult. Kerok and Kaun reassure her that they will find her some bright and loving young minds for a pack and get her into one of Ikun's local public universities, and make sure that she and her pack will make great activists and be a huge help for Ryen-pack's goals regardless. Obviously, this is not really what Kya wants to hear. She makes up her mind that even if she can't get off the planet as a scientist, she can still get off the planet as a soldier, and resolves to join Ikun's military, not just to escape a "dying world" but also to spite her birth-pack. She knows that her pack will never approve of this, and really wants the 100,000 qoin (converting alien currencies is hard, but this is likely about $20k USD) she and Ayen were each promised in order to get their lives started once they separate from Ryen-pack, so she lies that she has signed up for an environmentalist NGO and will travel for a few years and find a pack for herself that way. Kaun is a bit skeptical, but Nua thinks it's a brilliant idea, and he eventually convinces Kerok, who convinces the the rest of the pack to sign off on Kya's separation papers as well as Ayen's. Kya regrets not being around to shield Nyak and Korek from the toxic world of politics anymore, but she's made up her mind.

Kya and Ayen both leave together in Y970, Ayen to join her new pack and start at Nktan University, and Kya to join the Ikun Army. Ayen reveals that she knows Kya is lying about joining the NGO and asks what she's really doing. Kya decides to be honest and unload everything she's been keeping in all these years. Ayen is outraged at this and accuses Kya of never having loved Ryen-pack, seeing as she's willing to work against everything they stand for, which really touches a nerve for Kya. The two briefly fight physically before Ayen disengages and tosses her bracelet into the lake; the two then part ways on hostile terms.
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just wanted to say that you're talented as f*ck
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firestar464 wrote: Fri Mar 29, 2024 10:17 pm just wanted to say that you're talented as f*ck
Thank you, it's always nice to hear <3
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Aktektan Ractor

Aktektan Ractor, aka Image from an old northwestern word for a messenger, is a few years older than Kya and Tau, having hatched in Y936. Aktektan-pack lives in a drab rundown apartment in Ikun's dirt-poor District 12 and works at a weapons factory owned by Ikoin Corporation assembling bombs and missiles for Ikun's military. Around Y950, production quotas at their factory are ramped up, as news reports show that in the south, Koranah is ramping up their own military and becoming increasingly bellicose, staging coups in several small pro-Ikun city-states and committing genocide (or so the TV says at least). Ikun is planning to send more troops and weapons to the region. Aktektan-pack is wildly supportive of this, even though it means higher quotas for them. They also seem to be constantly fighting with each other, and ignoring/isolating from each other over trivial issues; for instance they often leave Ractor by himself for hours at a time (not normal Kyanah behavior at all and seen as rather abusive in their society). However, Ractor the increased milatarism only benefits the military industrial complex and Ikun politicians, a view which he frequently and snarkily espouses even though it inevitably leads to shouting, name-calling, and violence. Karien, who laid Ractor's egg, tries to shelter him from the worst of it, but is mostly ineffectual. She also teaches Ractor to swim, a very rare ability among Kyanah, who are slightly denser than water.

Ractor tends not to be the most dilligent worker in the factory, to say the least, and spends most of his free time (and some work time when no one is watching) reading on his beat up hand-me-down watch and trying to ignore the rest of his pack, and eschew's his pack's tendency to mostly just play-fight (and actual fight) and do the deed with each other and watch sports and "news" (which is often propaganda), all of which seem to get on his nerves. Though the pack's other children, of which there are many, will often "play fight" with Ractor without the "play" part, much to his annoyance and disgust. Ractor sees Nyaken playing neten-tyak, a complex strategy board game and she begrudgingly agrees to teach them.


A few years go by, and in Y954, Aktektan-pack is still working in the same job as before, though apparently the is now employing a "data-driven" system for "optimizing inefficiencies" with ubiquitious sensors and video monitoring. Which proves to be wildly unpopular with everyone. Aktektan-pack decries the "lazy Dunelanders" ruining things for everyone, while Ractor complains about government spying. And everyone begins trying to tamper with the signals or sabotage other employees to not be at the bottom of the list. Meanwhile, it seems that food prices are going up while the quantity and quality are going down, especially for Aktektan-pack who can only afford highly processed and trash quality meat. Which Ractor, being Ractor, vociferously objects to (and claims, with no evidence, that processed foods are why Nyaken can't lay viable eggs) but it told rudely to shut up and eat or starve by Nedak. Nyaken meanwhile goes back on her earlier plans to stop drinking, which appears to be partly motivated by once again having laid unviable eggs; none of Aktektan-pack's children are hers, which causes her to be deeply resentful of them. This starts another blowout fight between her and Tanun and Nortak, two other adults in the pack. While Karien is usually fairly nice to Ractor and his siblings, and Nyaken can at least be civil while they're playing neten-tyak together, Ractor has few if any other positive interactions with his pack. Nedak in particular appears to be quite insufferable and constantly has a snide answer to everything, but Tanun is the most overtly violent.


Things continue to go downhill for Aktektan-pack. The factory continues to automate as technology develops, which leads to more conflict and fighting between the workers as they jockey for position. Nyaken's drinking and smoking continues to escalate--to be fair most of the rest of the pack does this, including some of Ractor's older siblings. When this leads to workplace accidents that cause Aktektan-pack pack to drop down in the rankings, Nyaken predictably blames everyone in the pack except herself and lambasts Ractor for being a singleton, which is a sign of bad luck. Her neten-tyak games with Ractor continue on the decreasingly frequent occasions that Nyaken is sober and they aren't completely incensed at each other, and Ractor is eventually able to hold his own, but hasn't yet defeated her. Slowly but surely, most of Ractor's older siblings separate and go look for their own packs; one or two eventually turn up at the same factory with their packs.

In Y958, things come to a head when Ractor tells off Nedak and Tanun for doing the deed while he is busy trying to read, and after much needling by two of Ractor's younger siblings, it comes to light that Ractor is asexual, which is not well-liked in Kyanah society. Karien, who laid Ractor's egg, is deeply apologetic to him, fearing that she may have somehow caused his "condition". Ractor is appreciative of the fact that she does not immediately gang up on him like the rest of the pack. Tanun wants Ractor gone immediately, but Nyaken says that's not happening until Ractor is capable of love. This leads to yet another fight and, which Nyaken is also dragged into, and Nedak throws Nyaken's inability to lay viable eggs in her face, which only adds more fuel to the flames, although Ractor and Nyaken have a common enemy in this fight, which is unusual. After things simmer down, Ractor and Nyaken play one last game of neten-tyak, and Ractor scores his first win against her. Instead of being proud of him, Nyaken only says she's disappointed in him, and he will never love or have a pack. They don't play ever again after that, but Ractor also doesn't separate, as he takes Nyaken's words to heart and believes that since he'll never find a pack, he's better off here.

Into the Y960s, Ractor remains with Aktektan-pack, even as all but his two youngest siblings separate from the pack. The working situation at the factory becomes even more toxic and precarious, all the automation and robotics being deployed don't make their jobs eaiser, they just make them more convoluted, especially as staff are cut and quotas are raised in preparation for Project Hope and Ikun's other military endeavors. With their savings already being nonexistent, increasing prices of food, fuel, and electricity, and Nyaken and others' increased drinking and smoking capsaicin (to Kyanah, a psychoactive and moderately addictive substance) mean that they're slowly becoming mired in consumer debt. Despite everything, they still are somehow able make their donations to the Project Hope war effort, motivated by extensive propaganda and peer pressure. Though Ractor is disdainful of this, pointing out that none of them will ever be on the starships. And predictably gets told off for not loving his city-state. At some point, Nyaken starts smoking pure capsaicin, which is a lot stronger than just fireflower leaves, and this spreads to the rest of the pack. Attempts to find side jobs for the most part don't go particularly well, and most are short-lived and/or pay next do nothing.

Karien is no longer Ractor's biggest defender; while she still cares for him, she's simply tired of taking all the abuse from the rest of the pack every time she takes his side in a fight, and begins to withdraw, though privately she tells him that the pack is going down and Ractor needs an exit plan lest he be dragged down with them, financially and emotionally. Though Ractor stubbornly refuses to budge, even when Karien insists he can overcome his condition and find a pack. He continues to spend his time reading anything he can find, though his hand-me-down smartwatch is beginning to die despite his best efforts to repair it with tools and components stolen from the factory, and no one seems amenable to getting him a new one. And he also takes to writing long and angsty diatribes on Ikun's governance, Project Hope, and misanthropic (miskyanahthropic?) rants and bits of poetry. Though whenever any of his pack happen to see any of this, they react with scorn and derision, or even try to delete some of the more seditious stuff, so he keeps it to himself. And as the years go by, the pack has to sell a lot of stuff, including Ractor's smartwatch and their car, to make ends meet, and deal with some pretty shady packs, leading to a few stints in prison.


During the especially hot and arid summer of Y967, wildfires smolder across the Ikun oasis, filling the air with toxic fumes, while water levels reach record lows, and many buildings in Ikun itself catch fire. Aktektan-pack's apartment building burns down while Ikun's firefighters are occupied in the wealthier districts. They briefly live on the factory floor before finding an equally rundown apartment. With slightly higher rent of course. Ractor gradually finds himself becoming interested in Kyakenadak, and even encounters a pack of recruiters online (much to their chagrin, he tries to debate/argue with them about the finer points of their ideology). However, upon finding out that the packs bankrolling Kyakenadak fly around in private jets, own shares in coal mines and weapons manufacturers, and hobnob with politicians at exclusive climate conferences, he eventually becomes disgusted and loses interest in the group, instead just becoming disillusioned and nihilistic about everything.

Aktektan-pack continues to sink into a deeper and deeper financial mess, especially as Nyaken continually tries medical treatments to lay viable eggs, despite probably being too old for that at this point. Their donations to Ikun's war effort/Project Hope, motivated by extensive propaganda, don't help out their financial situation either. Nedak, Nortak, and Ractor confront Nyaken over the pack's finances, with predictable results: a fight. Nedak, whose birth-pack was in the Ikun Army, begins encouraging Ractor to join the military, saying it will make him into something loveable, but Ractor refuses to have anything to do with Ikun's war machine. Even Karien suggests this might be a good idea, but drops it after Ractor snaps at her.

Going into Y968, Nyaken's health begins to fail, though she remains as irascible as ever. Nedak ramps up the pressure on Ractor to join the military, though Nyaken still resists this idea for the same reason as before, saying that first he needs to be lovable. Though secretly very deep down there is some small part of her that would miss him if he separated. Not that she'd say that in front of anyone, especially Ractor. In the aftermath of the attack on the Ikun Spaceport by Kyakenadak, Nyaken insists that they join a march in support of Project Hope, an idea which the pack have mixed opinions on, though Nyaken, as Alpha forces the matter. Afterwards, Ractor decides he's had enough of sulking in the corner every night and absolutely unloads on the entire pack, even Karien, saying that maybe he would know how to love if any of them had ever set an example, and throws Nyaken's lack of her own young in her face.

This is finally enough to get Nyaken to flip and authorize kicking Ractor onto the street for good. Though Karien tries to apologize for everything, Ractor doesn't want to hear any of it and storms off. Now on his own on the streets, he considers his options. He's extensively read up on the activities of Ikun's lawspeakers, the City Alpha, and how they correlate with the job market, and realizes that the latest economic downturn is Ikun's government deliberately crashing the economy to drive military recruitment numbers for Project Hope by cutting off other options for young Kyanah like himself. He's been sort of looking into this for a couple of years and it all comes together the night he's kicked out. He doesn't have the mental energy to do anything with this information and decides that if he can't beat the government, he may as well join them, and signs up for the Ikun Army, despite being a bit disgusted with himself for playing right into Nyektak-pack's hands.
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You're extremely imaginative Jakob, well done and I love the thread so far.
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A random break from characterization for a beastiary of the Kyanah homeworld. The Kyanah seem to divide the life forms on their planet into different taxonomic groups based largely on their method of locomotion. Obviously all 80,000 animal species can't be listed, but these groups include:

The walkers. Land-based flightless creatures that walk on two or four legs, and may or may not have feathers. This is the second most diverse group, with examples including:

The Kyanah themselves, obviously, as well as various proto-Kyanah species that are now extinct.

The tkorks, the other extant branch of the Kyanahforms. These creatures vaguely resemble Kyanah, and indeed they share a common ancestor with true Kyanah around 4-5 million Earth years ago, although they tend to be smaller and more nimble (rarely exceeding 40 kilograms), but with proportionally larger teeth and claws. Like Kyanah, most tkorks form pack structures with superficially similar behaviors, and share their carnivorous diet, but have a far more limited understanding of tool use and language (some tkorks have been taught simple words and phrases but don't seem to be able to express complex and abstract ideas). They often mimic Kyanah speech in a garbled and distorted manner, much like Earth parrots, but it's unclear to what degree, if any, they understand the vocalizations they're repeating. And unlike Kyanah, multiple packs rarely collaborate towards a common goal. Although the word tkork comes from an old scrubland word meaning "stupid one", they are more intelligent and adaptable than almost any other organisms on the planet, with only Kyanah themselves blowing them out of the water; really they're only "stupid ones" compared to Kyanah. Most tkork species are endangered or extinct in the modern era, but a couple have adapted to life in urban areas and as a result have done quite well for themselves, preying on other urban life forms and abandoned or discarded food. In fact, in many scrubland cities, they're something of a pest, rummaging through trash receptacles, opening unlocked doors, and harassing passerby with sticks and stones. However, due to their high intelligence and agility, removing them from urban areas is often difficult. Tkorks tend not to be well-liked by Kyanah, as they sit squarely in the uncanny valley, and aren't even particularly edible due to the risk of blood-borne diseases and deadly prions, but they are often used for various scientific studies. Being native to the northern latitudes, they aren't found as far south as Ikun, and the city-state's government has gone to considerable lengths to prevent them from being introduced. Tkorks are some of the very few non-Kyanah animals with six-core brains.

Nyruds, a quadrupedal species of browsing, solitary, egg-laying herbivores that vaguely resemble enormous Komodo dragons, with males averaging 5.4 meters in length and 1.2 meters in height, with a mass of slightly over 2 tons, while females average 4.1 meters in length and 1.0 meters in height, with an average mass of 1.3-1.4 tons. In addition to their large mass, nyruds defend themselves with thick skin, a whip-like tail, and a robust facial plate studded with bony spikes. They rather indiscriminately feast on leaves with their beak-like mouths and are a very important animal to the Kyanah, having been among the first to be domesticated. Their meat, eggs, and blood are very commonly consumed in most cultures, their skins are converted into leather, and before mechanized transport, the nyruds themselves were the animal of choice for beasts of burden and cavalry. A line of charging bull nyruds, each one dripped out in war bling and ridden by an entire pack of armored knights, would have been a terrifying sight for any infantry pack before the advent of decent firearms. Nyruds are essentially the Swiss army knife of domesticated animals, and dozens of breeds have been developed for specific roles over the milennia. Even in the modern era, they are the symbol of more than a few city-states, and the namesake for various civilian and military vehicles.

Tyorkets, another species to be domesticated by the Kyanah. They are quadrupedal carnivores with a layering of feathers averaging around 20 kilograms in the wild, with an average height of 50-60 centimeters, though domesticated breeds can be considerably larger. Like most walkers, they are egg laying, and they tend to form temporary monogamous pair bonds to raise their young. Their most notable feature is their extreme speed, they can reach 100 kilometers per hour in short bursts. Due to the thick atmosphere and high gravity, this can only be acheived by having a very narrow and streamlined form to reduce drag, and an enormous amount of fast-twitch muscle fibers in their legs. Once they catch their prey, they make up for their small size by dealing enormous damage with 10-centimeter sickle-shaped dew claws. Prehistoric Kyanah would often steal tyorket eggs from their nests, hatch them, and raise them to assist their own packs in hunting. Typically, they would be trained to advance ahead to weaken and immobilize prey, for instance by severing the tendons in their legs, while the slower-moving Kyanah would follow behind and use their own spears, teeth, and claws to finish it off. Tyorkets are often kept as pets in the modern era--usually with their dangerous sickle claws trimmed--and despite their four-core brains they are quite intelligent, able to display distinct personalities, recognize individual Kyanah, and obey verbal commands.

Sandstriders, an insectovorous egg-laying tetrapod native to the Dunelands with a mass of 100-125 kilograms. They have a comically splayed out posture with webbed feet that enable them to sneak up on subterranean creatures like Sandworms (see below) without triggering their vibration sensors. Their snouts are elongated into multiple flexible tentacle-like appendages to pick up small crawlcritters from burrows hidden in the sand, and tight crevaces in rocks. Like most large walkers in the Dunelands, they have humps on their back to store water for their long journeys between the sparse oases. These factors combine to create a creature that looks like a bizarre cross between an anteater, a camel, and a lizard. Sandstriders are occasionally consumed by Kyanah, especially in Duneland cultures.

Thukukenoids are one of two classes of flying animal. Thukukenoids fly by floating like living balloons, using enormous bladders filled with hydrogen gas or hot air, scooping airweeds, pollen, spores, and wind-borne small animals into their shovel-like mouths as they float along. Their sizes range from 15 centimeters and a handful of grams, to the behemoth Giant Ryothah, with a gas bladder up to 6 meters tall and 3 meters wide, weighing in at 25 kilograms. This category is named after the thukuken, a medium-sized thukukenoid reaching about 1 meter on average, which is commonly farmed by the Kyanah, who generally puncture their gas bladders to prevent them from just floating away. Smaller species and juvenile thukukens are sometimes prepared by stuffing the gas bladder with meats and roasted tubers.

Wingbeasts or gliders are the other class of flying animal, definitely the less alien of the two types of flyers on the Kyanah homeworld. They glide by unfolding highly optimized airfoil shaped wings, using a fixed-wing configuration rather than flapping like birds, which allows them to be somewhat heavier and more robust than Terran birds and still fly. They also tend to have large, robust, almost spring-like rear legs enabling them to make high jumps, making it easier to gain some initial altitude on takeoff. These creatures typically live in mountainous areas where they can leverage ridge lift and thermals to take off more easily, and tend not to use flight for short maneuvers as takeoff is for more energy demanding than Earth birds. When on the ground, wingbeasts will fold in their wings to protect them from predators and the elements and adopt a quadrupedal stance. Wingbeast diets are diverse, they can be herbivores, omnivores, or carnivores. As wingbeasts tend to cover great distances during their lives, rarely returning to the same place twice, laying eggs is not practical; instead they have a marsupial-like pouch for their young to be able to carry them with them.

Watermeat refers to the class of swimming creatures that inhabit the planet's oases. These can be quite diverse, but include the kenits and the neuz.

Neuz are amphibious creatures that can swim like eels within water or slither like snakes on land. They typically lay airborne eggs that catch the wind and float away from the oasis; when they land and hatch, the babies make their way to the first oasis they can find, and tend to spend most of their lives in the water once they find one, rarely venturing beyond the shoreline, especially as their vestigial limbs tend to atrophy in adulthood. Neuz have a broad array of sizes, ranging from less than a centimeter up to about 2 meters in length. Their aquatic nature is ironically quite useful on a desert planet, as few predators are able or willing to swim into the oases to pursue them. Most neuz species are herbivorous, feeding on aquatic plantlife in the oases and on their shores, but larger species will often feed on smaller neuz, small shore-dwelling animals, and kenits.

Kenits are semi-sessile water creatures consisting of a substrate anchored to the bottom of the oasis, which moves very slowly, if at all. Attatched to this substrate are numerous tentacles; unlike sessile Earth animals like sponges, these tentacles are mobile, with simple brains and eyes, and can reach out to grab prey. As kenits are relatively small, with the longest specimens being similar in size and shape to strands of spaghetti, they mostly consume plants and creatures like tiny aquatic worms, but small neuz can fall victim to the largest species. To avoid being preyed upon or evaded by their own prey, kenits employ sophisticated camouflage, being barely distinguishable from plants or the oasis bottom. To reproduce, kenit tentacles can detatch and swim to another location, where they will grow a substrate and plant themselves down, allowing a new colony to start growing. Unlike neuz, they have no practical way to transport themselves across the desert between oases, and thus aren't often seen beyond the Meatbucket region (an unusually mild and wet area with a high and irregular water table, leading to many interconnected oases). However, they've been introduced either accidentally or deliberately by Kyanah to other oases and are sometimes farmed in other regions of the world.

Crawlcritters tend to refer to small organisms that travel in and on the ground on an irregular number of legs and typically have only a stalk, with no cores in their brains. They can broadly be divided into "worms" with no legs, and "true crawlcritters" with six or more. Crawlcritters can be eaten by Kyanah but this is only common in very impoverished city-states, as they will typically avoid them except as a last resort. They are typically detrivorous or herbivorous in nature. One notable example is the sandworm, a detrivore native to the Dunelands (every desert planet has to have sandworms!) which burrows underground and has a knack for sensing vibrations...and they're about 10-20 centimeters long, blind, toothless, and have no defensive mechanism whatsoever save for armored skin and foul-tasting secretions that are also used to reinforce their tunnels. Sandworms tend to be gregarious creatures that concregate in burrows with dozens or hundreds of specimens. Though there are countless other species occupying nearly every nook and cranny of the planet.
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The plants on the Kyanah homeworld are divided into four main categories, which diverge considerably from Earth plants, despite some notable parallels.

Two of these categories, endoskeleton plants and exoskeleton plants, are considered the structured plants, which make up virtually all large plants on their world (though not all species are large). In the exoskeleton plants, the structural support is provided by a hard woody exterior that protects the core from damage, while inside is a softer core used for nutrient transfer and water storage. In endoskeleton plants, it's the other way around, the woody load-bearing part is on the inside, and on the outside is a softer, more pliable layer with a predominantly cellulose matrix containing not only nutrient and water transfer infrastructure, but a network of nerves running across the plant's surface, allowing information about conditions or threats in one part of the plant to be relayed to the rest of the plant, or even communicated to nearby plants of the same species using chemical secretions. This matrix, due to its high cellulose content, is similar in texture to cotton, but stronger and more securely attached to the woody core than, say, a cotton boll, you couldn't just pluck it off with your bare hands, at least without considerable effort.

The largest species of structured plants are similar in size to small trees from Earth, with tough, rigid exoskeleton plants reaching maximum heights of 10-12 meters, while more pliable endoskeleton plants max out at 6-8 meters. However, plenty of species are much more akin to shrubs or bushes. Regardless of size, these plants have a completely inverted growth pattern compared to Earth trees and bushes. As the plants grow, additional trunks will descend downwards from the main trunk and make multiple points of contact with the ground, where they take root to help stabilize the plant as it grows taller; both endoskeleton and exoskeleton plants do this. Beneath the ground, enormous root networks collect scarce water from far away and provide additional stability. These factors mean that they take up much more space than Earth trees, preventing dense forests from existing as a biome. Also, rather than having many small and flimsy leaves, they have a smaller number of large leaves with robust woody supports, in order to enhance durability and protection against herbivores, strong winds induced by the 2.2 bar atmosphere, and gravity-induced stress induced by the planet's 1.4G. Each leaf might be half a meter across and noticeably thicker than a normal leaf but there will be far fewer of them than on an Earth tree. All endoskeleton plants and a few exoskeleton plants can dynamically angle their leaves to optimize sunlight capture.

Structured plants also don't produce flowers or seeds, instead relying on the wind to disperse large volumes of spores across great distances; since spores can travel further than bigger, heavier seeds, they are better able to cross the gaps between oases, and can remain dormant for a long time until the rare rains allow them to germinate. The comparative cheapness of spores also means that larger numbers can be produced compared to seeds, increasing the probability that some make it to the next oasis or other habitable area.

Ecosystem-wise, exoskeleton plants usually live in harsher, drier, windier areas, with simpler ecosystems, where mechanical stress from the elements are the biggest threats, and there is less going on in their environment, making the nerve system less useful. Whereas endoskeleton plants usually live in comparatively lush environments (by the standards of a desert planet at least) in more dynamic ecosystems, where being a "social plant" is advantageous and surroundings can change rapidly, forcing plants to chemically and/or mechanically adjust equally rapidly. While their soft outer layer is less durable than an exoskeleton plant, they make up for this with thorns, poison, and inter-plant communication, whereas exoskeleton plants just have the brute-force protection of their wooden shell.

The other two categories of plants are the unstructured plants, comprised of invertebrate plants and airweeds. Invertebrate plants have no woody support structure at all, inside or out, which limits their height to a few centimeters to protect them from the gravity and the thick atmosphere's stiff winds. This category includes the only seed-bearing, flowering plants on the planet. Due to their small size, they can't biologically afford the enormous spore factories of structured plants, and lack the height to disperse them across vast distances in the wind, so they invest in smaller numbers of heavier seeds that germinate close by or get transported by animals.

However, not all invertebrate plants have seeds and flowers, especially the older and more primitive taxa. There are also the various aquatic plants, which tend to be invertebrate, and the crawlers are invertebrate as well. As the name suggests, these plants crawl along the ground, spreading in intricate maze-like patterns and fixing themselves to the ground with additional soft stems as they expand. The result can be described as similar to kudzu or ivy patches, but less dense and usually confined to the ground instead of climbing, and serves a similar niche to Terran grasses (which are too flimsy to thrive under 1.4G), in that it carpets the ground in savanna analogues, and grazing herbivores consume it.

Last, but not least, we have the airweeds, which not only have no skeleton, but no connection to the ground at all. Some species do actually still sit on the ground, just not attached to it, resembling moss carpets or tumbleweeds, but most airweed species are free-floating, using the wind to endlessly drift around, with the thick atmosphere overcoming the heightened gravity to make this a viable evolutionary niche. Airborne airweeds tend to be microscopic or barely visible, but there are a few that measure a centimeter or more across, often using air sacs for buoyancy so they can remain aloft despite their large size. Wind and weather patterns, and conditions of the underlying soil, give rise to airweed belts encircling the planet, where airweed concentrations are far higher than outside.
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This actually relates to an important point on Kyanah biology (and the other animals on their planet). One may notice that quite a lot of species propagate themselves by airborne means; despite the higher gravity, the thicker atmosphere cancels this out to make it a viable strategy. The end result is that there is a far higher concentration of airborne biomass floating around than on Earth, a veritable stew of spores, airweeds, and even airborne eggs from neuz and crawlcritters fill the air and can irritate lungs that aren't evolved to deal with it; an unprepared human would quickly find themselves coughing their lungs bloody if teleported to a temperate region of the planet, especially if they spawn in an airweed belt (they would be mostly okay in the arid equatorial regions, but there heatstroke would get them instead, as temperatures of 60-70 Celsius are common, and higher is not unheard of).

Kyanah and the planet's other native animals have evolved to deal with this by means of a tracheal sieve, which physically blocks the bio-particulates from entering their lungs, like a sieve (as the name might suggest), in addition to the various other active defenses employed by Terran lungs. On the flip side, this sieve means that Kyanah lungs are less efficient at drawing oxygen from the air, and require higher partial pressure of oxygen.Their long-term survival on Earth thus relies on advanced medical technology combined with the time-honored acclimation techniques used by mountaineers; an unprepared Kyanah simply teleported to Earth would be short of breath, even at sea level.

Environmental factors can influence these bio-particulates. Due to climate change and pollution impacting the thukukenoid populations, which float like balloons and eat the airborne biomass, the planet has in modern times experienced a massive boom in bio-particulate concentration, especially massive airweed blooms, which lead to lung irritation and reduced quality of life for everyone, and allergic reactions and death in highly sensitive individuals, as even the tracheal sieves are overwhelmed.
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Back to characterization wheee!

Rtoryn Kwert (aka Image, which actually doesn't mean anything, Ikun's immigration authorities just changed his actual name to sound more "Ikun-ish") hatched in Y944 to Rtoryn-pack, along with his other half Troyt. Rtoryn-pack is not originally from Ikun, but instead comes from the Duneland city of Adronkin and immigrated to Ikun in Y950. They have been apparently waiting for a long time (a couple of years at least) to be approved for an interview and in the meantime, their home city-state has been dealing with their oasis drying out leading to a coup attempt and civil war looming on the horizon. One of the pack's adults, Nekyez, suggests that their application will never move forward and they should try to sneak or bribe their way into Ikun, or find a different city state. However, this is likely not possible, as Ikun's borders are guarded by natural terrain, heavily armed border police, and a "virtual wall" of cameras, drones, and robots; many packs have been shot trying to sneak into Ikun. Rtoryn-pack's alpha Rytor insists that Ikun is a land of opportunity but they must make it their honestly to avoid giving their people a bad name. At long last, the pack is informed that they have been invited to challenge the Ikun government for entry into the city. A young Kwert asks what's in Ikun, to which Alpha Rytor simply says "hope" (ironic considering a certain megaproject going on in Ikun).

They set about securing a cleaning job in Ikun, which seems like a step down from their current position as office workers in a local textile factory, but Ikun's economy is so much bigger that even a janitor pack makes about the same in Ikun as Rtoryn-pack does in Adronkin. This done, they at last leave everything behind and begin the long drive to Ikun. Their challenge against Ikun's immigration authority is successful and they are granted access to the city, but it is not easy for them, they are grilled for hours (whereas some of the blue packs present for their immigration challenge get through in minutes) and pressed for a special "processing fee" that's implied to have been made up on the spot by the authorities. However, at the end of the day (literally) they are let in. One of the packs working for the government advises them to change their names to sound more "Ikun-ish" to avoid drawing negative attention, which is how Luept becomes "Kwert".

A few years go by, Rtoryn-pack has been working hard and trying to save as much money as they can while living in their assigned district--Ikun's poor 25th district, which has a high Dunelander population. The climate is milder in their home city, there aren't rolling power and water outages, and insurgent groups aren't blasting their neighborhood with artillery. However, like with most things, there is a catch. Living in Ikun is more expensive than Adronkin, so the wage boost isn't as impressive as it seems on paper. The area they live in turns out to be a hotbed for gang violence with numerous shootings, robberies, and burning buildings, and Ikun's police tend to be less than helpful, arriving to the scene late or not at all for calls from Dunelander neighborhoods--though this isn't entirely one-sided, many packs from these neighborhoods are uncooperative or hostile with the Ikun police as well. And on a minor note, they've had to adapt to diurnal living in Ikun, instead of the nocturnal that is common in the Dunelands.

And they, like most immigrants in Ikun, are being heavily monitored at all times, with AI monitoring their progress in assimilation and any slip-up or infraction carrying the risk of possible deportation and replacement with one of the other millions of packs beating down the door to get in. Rtoryn-pack's assimilation has been mixed, with the adults and especially the kids handling it to different degrees. Kwert seems to have taken better to it than his other half Troyt, especially with regards to learning the language, which Troyt is not a fan of. Most of the adults, especially Rytor, very much believe in the Ikun dream, however Ntreyn has always been rathern skeptical of the whole idea; she doubts that Ikun will ever truly welcome them.

Rtoryn-pack does ease the transition by establishing contacts with Dunelander groups in their district and even gains a couple of ikoin/allies. They frequently attend "Dunelander parties"; these events seem like raucous parties on the surface but are actually highly formal and ritualized events wherein elder and higher status packs are given gifts and favors in exchange for assistance with finances, networking, dispute resolution and arranging future packs for their young. There is also heavy pressure to resolve disputes between fellow Dunelanders at these events instead of relying on Ikun's official courts. They also encounter many packs at these events who have become gangsters and criminals to try and make it in Ikun, which Rytor does the best to steer his pack clear of. They do, however, make a couple of Ikoin; one member of Rtoryn-pack, Gadah, has a brother whose pack is also in Ikun. The pack also hatches two new girls, Neun and Koren (very typical Ikun names), in Y953.

A wave of tax increases in Y958 to support Project Hope threatens to wipe out up what little savings Rtoryn-pack has managed to build up; they have been planning to start a business in their district for a while but this has made the idea a pipe dream. As no bank in Ikun is willing to loan them enough money, Rtoryn-pack has no choice but to turn to their Dunelander party for assistance and get loaned some questionable money from questionable packs. However, with this, they are able to start a small grocery store selling ethnic Duneland food. Their store actually does well enough, despite the teetering economy, and the pack can even pay off their debt within a few years. However, going into the Y960s, there are increasing challenges. Their assimilation score at times teeters on the borderline, and one of their ikoin is actually thrown out when it dips too low. However, it seems that this happens to most immigrant packs, but the government only deports them if they don't like them, or they get too political. Rtoryn-pack contributes to the economy with their store and stays out of Ikun's politics, so the immigration authorities mostly leave them alone.

As Kwert and Troyt enter adolescence in the early Y960s, Kwert begins to reject his own culture, believing that the only way go ever be seen as true citizens of Ikun is to become, essentially, more Ikun than the natives. He pushes back against Dunelander food and attire, increasingly insists on using Ikun's language, even at home. He's increasingly disapproving and resentful of the Dunelander Parties (a fact which is noticed by other attendees and leads to Rtoryn-pack being chastised) and of the pack's long and dull trips across the city to visit the few temples to Duneland gods in Ikun. Meanwhile, Troyt moves in the other direction, increasingly refusing to have anything to do with Ikun's language or culture and adopts the "Blue is the great enemy" rhetoric espoused by many in the Dunelander gangs. The pack's adults--especially Rytor and Tkrien, who are the most pro-assimilation of the pack, aside from Kwert, and the two's older brothers--often try to mediate between the two and get them to moderate their ways, but they both become more set in their respective paths.

Rtoryn-pack's two oldest young separate in Y965 and Y966, one ends up joining Ikun's police force (it's common for young immigrants from the Dunelands to join Ikun's military or police, as it legitimizes them, and completing a term confers automatic naturalization even if a pack wouldn't otherwise qualify by majority rule), and the other, after finding a pack with the help of Rtoryn-pack, comes back with his new pack to help in the store, allowing them to remain open for longer hours and make more money; however these gains are mostly eaten up by another wave of tax increases for Project Hope. Meanwhile, violence simmers in District 25 as immigration increases, in no small part because Ikun and the corporations working on Project Hope want more cheap labor. The western and eastern Duneland gangs clash with each other, and with the native Ikun gang Blue Future, and the police become even more hesitant to get involved in the area due to the increasing danger, which leads to more violence in a vicious cycle.

Rtoryn-pack and their store become increasingly caught in the cross-fire, often succumbing to robberies and vandalism, and the Dunelander gangs increasingly pressure them for protection fees and favors, reminding Rtoryn-pack that it was their loan that allowed them to start the store to begin with. Rytor is especially disgusted with the gangs and refuses to have his pack directly help them, but they have no real choice but to pay the protection fees, and they have little or no recourse with the elders at the Dunelander Parties, nor with Ikun's authorities. In fact, one one or two occasions, said authorities raid their store looking for signs of gang activity; they don't find anything but trash the store and their living space in the back and threaten to have Rtoryn-pack deported. Amidst all this, Kwert because increasingly extreme in his rejection of Dunelander culture, resulting in many arguments with his birth-pack.

Troyt separates from Rtoryn-pack in Y967 and despite insistence from Rytor that he not get involved in the gangs, that is exactly what he does with his pack that the Dunelander Parties match him with. They start off their time as a pack with a stint in prison together, and upon getting out, immediately get into a three-way shootout against the police and a Blue Future pack, which ends up killing Troyt. The incident prompts Ikun's authorities to begin investigating where Rtoryn-pack's store got its initial funding from, putting their status in Ikun in jeopardy once again. The Duneland Party elders are able to use their connections in district politics to get the case buried, but in exchange expect not only an exorbitant fee, but also for Rtoryn-pack to move some mysterious packages for them. Packages which they suspect to be several kilos of pure, industrial-grade capsaicin. Rytor is outraged at this and comes to blows with the elders, but Nekyez and Rinun calm him down and convince him that they have no other option if they want to keep the shop and stay in Ikun, and the adults decide to go for it, though they are able to negotiate down the number of packages they're supposed to move.

However, Kwert flatly refuses, saying that either they decline the deal, or he's turning their pack in, and tells them to think of the example they're setting for Neun and Koren, and goes on a tirade about how associating with Dunelanders always leads to nothing but trouble and that their culture is nothing but drugs, violence, and death. This clearly hurts the rest of the pack, but they have a heart to heart, with Nekyez lamenting that they've tried to earn an honest living, only to find the deck stacked against them at every turn, and Rytor pointing out the good parts of their culture and the times their people have helped them over the years. Kwert proposes that they only pay the money, and don't move any packages, and in exchange, they only get legal assistance instead of the case just vanishing. The elders are actually pretty impressed with Kwert at this proposal, and seem to want to have fewer young packs getting involved in the drugs and gangs, and even suggest they might know some other young Kyanah who might be looking for packs soon. With their legal assistance, Rtoryn-pack is able to win the challenge against them, stay in Ikun, and hold onto their store for now. Kwert slowly starts to be less wildly opposed to his culture, though coming to actually accept it will be a long and slow process.

In Y970, the military propaganda in Ikun begins ramping up as the city-state is looking for soldiers for Project Hope. This, along with his general desire to be seen as a real citizen of Ikun, prompts Kwert to consider joining the Ikun Army, a move which Rtoryn-pack wholeheartedly approves of, with Rytor especially saying that it's a good and honorable path, and not to worry about the shop, as some of their other children's packs will run it when Rtoryn-pack is too old to do so. Thus, interestingly, Kwert is the only member of the future Ryen-pack who separates from his birth-pack while they're alive and on good terms with him. Which does tend to shape his attitudes going forward.
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Re: Road to Hope

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Damn a wholesome reconciliation arc
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